I dont do edits lmao sorry i think u have the wrong person
shit jungkook says
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FRIck OK thank u
shit thats really good its personal and its something that a lot of people can relate to i like it and i think it’ll definitely raise your mark!!
i hope so!! thank u for liking it
that was good. You had a few typos but the overall message and raw emotion really touched me. if you read this out loud, the impact will be huge. great job.
thank u so much ill try my best to provide a performance for my class and hopefully not drown them in my tears lmao
ill check for the typos too
NO NEED TO TRY WHEN YOU LOOK THIS DAMN GOOD
ok i knew there were some weird parts because my writing is awkward sometimes like my social life but ill fix it
THANK u so much lets hope i dont cry when i perform it because i cried when i wrote it lmao
Uh, great submission :)
pls tell me if some parts dont make sense
ppl arent supposed to know what im talking about in the beginning so ya
i accept any feedback